I love your tonal values and the highlighting, I think they look great and in my opinion, the pokemon are PERFECT... I have a problem with the strap across her chest, though, it wouldn't separate cleavage quite like that... The shirt would more so drape across and the strap would only create a slight divot... (If that explains that...) then the focusing on the background looks great except for that first tree... It looks less in focus than the grass right in front of it and is kind of confusing... Her arms are a little bit thin, I think if you widened them just slightly it would be more proportionate... Keep up the good work, though, it looks amazing!
I love how bright the colors are! The pink in her shirt and the yellow of the strap and her hair go together well. You can tell you paid great attention to detail with the backsplash lighting on her calves and the sparingly placed colored lineart Love the way you drew the pokemon, and the shadow underneath her too!
It is pretty good, I like the coloring, the grass, the pokemons. I do think the arms are a little too thin and that the first tree could had a little more leaves. But other than that, really good. One last detail I like is the effects on the road, you gave it a very nice look to the soil with the combination of light and darker tones and those dots that you put.