I love your tonal values and the highlighting, I think they look great and in my opinion, the pokemon are PERFECT... I have a problem with the strap across her chest, though, it wouldn't separate cleavage quite like that... The shirt would more so drape across and the strap would only create a slight divot... (If that explains that...) then the focusing on the background looks great except for that first tree... It looks less in focus than the grass right in front of it and is kind of confusing... Her arms are a little bit thin, I think if you widened them just slightly it would be more proportionate... Keep up the good work, though, it looks amazing!